I am a student at St Bernadette’s Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note… some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, August 24, 2018
All About Me
Hi my name is Phillip. My Favritey soccer player is Messi. My favritey then to do is play cars 3 drivin to win and fifa world cup.When I grow up I what to be a air forse plane driver.I am 9 years old.
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Hey Phillip,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great post! I really like the cool text and the fact you have written below.
I love mexican food! I am wondering what you like to put on your Nachos?
Be careful with what information you share online because everyone can see it! Things like your whole name and date of birth should be kept private, so you may want to go in and edit this post.
Thank you for your comment Miss Morgan.In my Nachos I have minse Nacho chips and chies. Do you know what I shod I do next time?
DeleteNext time it would be cool to see some pictures from Unsplash in your work too!
DeleteHi Phillip I like your all about me poster. Why did you make It? And how did you feel making it? Maybe go through again next time because I found some mistakes. It reminds me of my family because it has a lot of colors.
ReplyDeleteFrom Grace
Hello Philip I very like your all about me poster its really cool have you ever been too Dunedin mosgiel? I have never been there and I really still like your post bye.
ReplyDelete-Erin
Hi Phillip is me again Grace, I like your all about me poster. The fonts you yose remind me of my happy memories. Why did you use these fonts? Maybe change the fonts next time because some of these ones are hard to read.
ReplyDeleteGrace.