Tuesday, August 14, 2018
god is present to me
In class we where doing RE, about how GOD is present to me.
God is Present to me… When i am Present to my teachers and my mum and chloe and john.God is present to me when i am kind to my nanny because i talk to her on my mums ipad.God is present to me when i am caring to my grandad because i help him fly his aeroplane.God is present to me when i help my mum clean the bedrooms.God is present to me when i am good.God Lovely to me...when i am Lovely to my nan, grandad.
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Hey Phillip i really like your blog post i like how you added punctuation. Its really good, and i like your writing about god is present to you, good job. Bye
ReplyDeletehello phillp!my name is mikhanya!I like your,god is present to me,
ReplyDeleteblog and I could tell my parent all about this!I hope you have a great day!!!!!!! haera ra!!!!!
I liked the way you used your punctuation. This part gave me a memory about when you wrote about your family and you did all the information about it. Next time, you could add more detail about what he does to you to help you. Why did you make a post of it and why did you choose to make a post like it?
ReplyDeleteHi Phillip Good job on the top writing part. Remember spaces after a full stop . why do you have a space in a middle? It reminds me of my garden because I did one with my garden in it.
ReplyDeleteFrom Grace.